Tuesday, 18 September 2007

One more river..............

Just a little bit down, a little depressed,
Feeling blue and a little bit stressed.
The weekend came, the weekend went,
It was, on the whole, another non-event.
Mondy morning, not much to report,
No better today, not even a thought.
Smile bravely on, put feelings aside,
Fight that urge to just run and hide.
Pick up the clothes, cook one more meal,
Wash all those dishes, no time to feel.
Ain't life a bitch when you're feeling so blue,
And inside you're screaming but no-one hears you?


keith hillman said...

Was this the same person that took The Road Ahead?

Magdalen Islands said...

Nice rhyme, Jayne.

Jayne :) said...

Well until her husband came home with a HUGE bar of fruit and nut, she was seriously considering it!

Thanks Gimme - frustration seems to bring the rhyming out in me :)

Ambre said...

What a beautiful piece Jayne! You should post this in the Poetry Coffee House. You write poems very well, but you hide them.

I can relate to this in every line.

"Inside you're screaming, but no-one hears you?"

Mark Antoney said...

Fabulous poem Jayne!


Jayne :) said...

Thanks guys - it's good to be appreciated :)

jadey said...

Jayne I like it and I strongly believe we all feel like this from time to time.